Comments : The Wait

  • 10 months ago

    by Brenda

    Oh wow! What a write! Beautifully done and in such a lovely setting.

    • 10 months ago

      by silvershoes

      Thank you! I made most of this up while singing in the shower (I like to put on an Irish brogue sometimes when I sing -- a tribute to my heritage haha). I thought I might as well submit it as a poem so I don't forget it.

  • 9 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is different, so I don't know how to put it in words but its
    so picture perfect I mean its so vivid and its like I'm waking with you
    in this moment...nicely written.

  • 8 months ago

    by Ben

    Daaaaamn....if you come out with this in the shower I might as well give up now *throws pen in the air* I loved your word choices in this but the phrasing and picture painting you do is quite something else.

    If I could nominate then I would but it's here and that's what counts!