Comments : Too Many Dates, One Choice.

  • 6 years ago

    by Brise

    You paint such an amazing picture through your poetry, great imagery, I enjoyed reading this, quite sad.

    • 6 years ago

      by Bleu

      Thank you so much.

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    sometimes, we need time apart to know where our hearts truly want to be. Nice story with good rhyme - the flow stumbled a bit in stanza 5, but all in all, a good poem.

    Take care.