Comments : An irresistible sin

  • 5 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judges comments

    An Irresistible Sin (by Ya--Na) 4 points.

    This is a poem that speaks to me of the truth in love.

    We have no control over who we love or wo love us. It's an undeniable thing.

    Sometimes it is lasting and sometimes it is oh so fleeting.

    I have read this poem a over and over, each time I do, I think something else. I always come back to the same thought.

    "That is what love is"

    Excellent work 4 points