Comments : Jamie (Prompt)

  • 6 months ago

    by Jamie

    I actually really liked the way this was written and not just because it was for me. It is different from what I normally see. There is a small typo in line 4 by the way- It'll should be 'It' or 'will' should be taken out of the poem itself. Thank you for this

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Had to nominate this one. These are excellent; you've really caught something here.

  • 5 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hhmmmn I'm envious how you write for other just kidding..anyway this is brilliant..hope i got mine kidding again