I actually really liked the way this was written and not just because it was for me. It is different from what I normally see. There is a small typo in line 4 by the way- It'll should be 'It' or 'will' should be taken out of the poem itself. Thank you for this

Had to nominate this one. These are excellent; you've really caught something here.

Hhmmmn I'm envious how you write for other artist...lol just kidding..anyway this is brilliant..hope i got mine too..lol kidding again