Comments : Images II

  • 1 week ago

    by Tony

    I missed this poems predecessor, but having read the two together now I can say that this brilliant. Mirrors, broken or otherwise, have long been a symbol for self reflection in society.

    I think the answer to the question posed in this instance is the mirror; to brittle to handle the reflection, and cracking from the strain. You Hellon, are anything but brittle.

  • 1 week ago

    by BOB GALLO

    A Persian verse:
    A girl came across herself
    in the water:
    Beauty has multiplied.

  • 1 week ago

    by The Prince

    This would work better as one poem, simply as it’s a direct continuation - not a ‘spiritual sequel’ :) having said that, I did enjoy this query into the idea of perception!

  • 1 week ago

    by Ya----Na

    Reflection (consequences) for sure.