Comments : THE Message

  • 5 years ago

    by D.

    Lovely poem, especially the final paragraph. I don’t quite understand the use of ‘thing’ in the second stanza though. The grammar is a little awry in it.

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thanks. Actually 's' was missing

  • This poem has been underestimated a great deal, true your form does not flow, but the message is SO profound and enlightening. Go forth and speak child of truth