The refrain 'I remember' before each quatrain is effective. It emphasises the content of the abuse theme. The journey, although powerful dark, is quite necessary to tell the story. The final quatrain is a pleasing one, one where the perpetrator is revealed who they are now in today's life: nothing

This is an inspirational write to all those who have suffered. This reminds them that there is hope ahead. Find the strength in yourself and break free from the chains.

Nice work and take care.