That was so cute!! I don't know why that would have made her rethink your friendship...that was a really sweet poem to write for her. I know a lot of people could relate to this with their best friend's...and I thought that was very much from the heart. (and thnx for the comment on "best friends vows"!!)

I agree with Seirra ..A lot of people can relate to this one..I think your doing fine with poetry and that hopefully a lot of people will comment to give you that mmph you need..Your doing great for a first timer..I once was in your shoes a couple of months ago..Anyways another five great job!

that was a really beautiful poem i gave u a 5*****...thx for commenting on my poem....keep it up....
*Sw33ti3*