hey very nice poem!!!! wow it seem you really like this guy. he must be really happy to have you.

What a touching love poem. I really liked this. My partner and I used to have a long distance relationship, but when the time was right he moved closer to me. I hope it all works out for you too. The way you described the things you could do were so lovely and sincere. Very well done.

what a lucky guy, excellent poem you have a lot of talent, well done .again :)

wow great poem it was very warming xxxxx

you are a very talented writer, dont ever stop!

One of those poems u just reread for the sake of it...
in my opinion...flow is essential for a poem...ur poems...(the ones ive read so far..)
have a great flow to them....
needless to say..another 5/5...=D