wow, dude that is a really cool poem, I love the words you used, not many rhymes but worked really well, keep up the good work mate :)

Thats a really really good poem! I feel a lot of emotion and frustration in it. Great job! Keep up the good work. I hope to see more of your works in the future!

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Wow, nice wording, makes it sound real good.

--Bryce~

I am speechless, that was very good.

Inspiring and a very powerful write. The words you used were breathtaking, very well done.

wow! u got 11 straight 5's ! how cool is that!!! great poem :-)

brilliant!! just so bloody brilliant!!

all i have to say is WOW... you have such a gift, keep it up .. you got a 5 from me! ... check out some of my poems if you want to also.

Love it. Great job! >3jess