aww that's beautiful and sweet! such nice writing :) keep it up <33
-Mortalidaga
xxxx
take care

good poem i really like it i agve it a 5

Beautiful writing, so sweet. Enjoyed it and keep writing.

Sniff tear! amazingly beautiful WOW! Im so impressed looking forward to reading more of your work
Much Luv Eirisa

wow, your talented, keep writing for everyones sake.

its so beautiful......luv ay much
~yolande~

AWW. This is also very sweet. it had really good flow and rythm and great diction. keep up the good work and take care. xmollyxx

because i finally realized
that the missing piece was you.......

i loved that verse.....i will send this to my friend and tell him about this place

Wow.. I'm not usually one for "happily ever afters" but this was quite good, i acctually enjoyed it. kkep up the good work

-Church

omg im crying it reminds me of someone in my life.........really amazing, keep on writin' =)