hey this is a really deep poem lots of emotion and thought gone in to it. its a great piece of work !

abby xxxxxx

Think its ur best poem...tell me wat u r gonna edit....oh ya n how abt writing a duet????//

i usually dont like poems that use "big complex words" but i LOVED this poem... i absolutely love it... one of the few out of many poems i've read that i truly like... very good job...i really hope to hear more poems from you! i would give you a 500... but i can only give you a 5! darn.. good job!!!!

omg. you are seriously so talented!!! you should get a book published! your an amazing writer! keep it up

wow ure still editing aswell, its great, i'd leave it just as it is!

Oh My F**king God- this is so........ WOW.....amazing.......you are soooooo talented (i'm a bit jealous actually - joke:) ) Great, simply great and dark. xmollyxx and thanks for your comment on my poem, sorry i took so long to read this 1, but boy is it great.

Wow......see i told u its awesome.....and ya...i am JEALOUS

Nice wording and imagery. Great work, well done.

Wow, I really liked that, I had some nice visuals while I was reading it, plus it had a good flow to it. Very good. I give it a 20 ^_^......Hmm? Oh I cant do that?....darn, ok then, 5 :P

--Bryce

This poem was really good. It was very deep and I loved the words you used...LiL One

sounds like a page from a diary.
i like it.

god this is amazing, i wish i had your talent, this is truly breathtaking. i'm in awe of your brilliance
xnikkix

This poem is excellent! Keep it up.

Wow also. Use of words was excellent and everything just flows brilliantly. amazing writing right there. loved it :)

P.s thnks 4 ur comment

Well..I gotta tell you the truth..this poem kicks ass...and I'm forced to give it 5 thumbs up:(

Truth Hurts don't it??? lol

Excellent write!

hey great poem :)
-Dayna

wow... i like it.. so cool... keep it up!!!

I liked it. Its very good.

awesome poem and greta writing you should be proud

pretty good