what a nice poem! check mine and let me know what you think k

how come my poems stink and everyone else's rock! o well, great poem keep writing

thanx for checking out my poem guys...

most excellent brandy!!! i loved your poem, and am excited to read more...keep writing the great poems...
weeman

Good job on this poem. short, but still conveys emotion.

Great poem overall, and the last line, puts a nice finishing touch. you commented on mine, so i did the same for you. i really liked it and can relate to the feeling of it.

It's a sad poem.. nice work.. I hope it isn't the truth? :o