that is a perfect poem and sence you made it im going to show it to the man that i love in hopes that he realizes how much i care about him ill let you know how it goes k

Thanku every1!! Glad it helped! xxx

Thanku Lindsay! :-) x

amazing poem. you have talent. well done
- shell x

Wow that was wiggy it reminded me ov my relationship w/ my girlfriend. It seems like she takes all her anger out on me but i dont care b/c i love her more than anything else in this world i give it a 5

I LOVE THIS POEM!! GOOD JOB!! KEEP WRITING!!!! If you want you can look at some of my poems..!!
xxmeggyxx

Thanku all SO much for your comments!!!!! xx

great poem. reminds me of what my hunny and i went throw. you should be come famous for this.

This was a great poem! Very nicely written.

Thats amazing, I'm adding you to my favourites, u av a gr8 guy! And ur a gr8 writer!

This Poem makes me think alot about how much i is my relationship could of ended up. You are a really good writer. Keep it up i enjoy readin you poems.

~!~ Crystal ~!~

Thanku so so so much!!!! xxxxxxxx*hugs*

Thanks hun!! xxx

Hi! Thanku SO much! Sure you can show it him if u relli think its that gud! Thankuu :-) xxx

I Love You :-)

:-) x

Great poem hun :-D Loved it :-D xxx keep up the brill writing xxx

Beautiful poem, keep up the amazing work. 5's too you.

Damn... that is soo deep. I can so relate to this. 5/5 FOR SURE!!!!

This is the same thing that happened to me too
i dont know what to do. to make her stay with me

its a good poem
really :)