Upon This Mortal

by Kevin   Dec 7, 2004


It’s all I can do
to hold on to you
as your heart demands
my inner passion
unbound as you are
a bright flashing star
the heat from your love
burns me sweetly and neatly
inside and out
I try not to shout

it’s all so honest
I’m inside a Goddess

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  • hehe neat writting!
    Shannon

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    In Regards you left to my poem for bob shank...yes he has left the site but if you want you should defently check out his new site...it's amazing...
    www.poetryman.friendpages.com

    thanks a lot for the comment kevin!
    and in regards to your poem, it was creative and kinda made me smile a little...you are a great writer...short and simple but to the point i like it...i wish i could write more poems like that.

    ~~~~~~God Bless~~~~~~~~~

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Nice! Very sexy.