I have a few different endings for this I'm not sure at this moment which one i like better.

http://www.forums.zombiepirates.org/showthread.php?p=109#post109
or
http://jacki.zombiepirates.org/

I feel that the jacki.zombiepirates one give sto much away at the end. Where the one in here still leaves the reader to make his own assumptions about the poem and the meaning about it. Tell me what do you think?

I love this. So incredibly beautiful, your symbolism was just flawless and absolulty lovely. I especially admired the lines,
"My arms reach up and pluck the decayed
remains left scorched and rotting around me."
Those were just so tragically put yet in a beautiful way. There is so much meaning behyind you extenive metaphors that really imapacted me and gave a huge appreciation for the piece. Excellent job

* one thing, you spelled "accepts" "excepts" (at least i think thats what you meant, "no one accepts me" as in no one wants me right? if that is your meaning, then it is spelled accepts"

Hey long time no see, just thought I'd drop in and see how you were doing. And I see you deffinatly haven't lost your touch. This poem was absolutely beautiful. I can't even come up with a compliment that would actually be worthy of it. You don't need me to tell you this, but you're still an awsome poet. Take care, alright?

--Bryce~

masterpiece

This is a great poem and I think you will be very pleased to read mine. The Forgotten Soul, White Cloud, Mirror of My Destiny and all the rest. I would really love it if you read all of my poem and left a comment on them. Thanks