Tell me how my poem is.

I know that this poems is retarted but Its was hard to write it down please tell me if its ok.

please vote my poem

girl how can you say this is a bad poem...i think this wonderful compared to mine...5 all the way

your poem was nice.. its good to express your feelings... you gotta let them out some how. thanks for the comment on my poem.
love maria aka mia

hey i finally got around to reading ur writtings thanks alot for your comment on my poem. its nice to kno someone likes what i write.

That was a cool poem. Hope you keep on writing. Thax for the comment and I will write to you when ever I need to talk.

That was a cool poem. Hope you keep on writing. Thax for the comment and I will write to you when ever I need to talk.

hey i think that your a really good writer.. you should keep it up.. and thanks for your comment on my poems!!

great poem I love it keep writing

This poem was really good. I think you described your feelings really well. Keep up the good work.

Really Good Poem Rebecca,
I'm Sorry This Had To Happen, Usually The Worst Feeling, You Just Want To Stop Everything In Your Life Just To Dwell On That, Even Though A Couple Of Months Later You Find Out It Wasn't Worth It. First Loves Are So Hard To Get Over, I Have Been There Myself, I Never Thought I Could Love At Such A Young Age, But i Did And It Tore Me Up When He Moved Away. Sorry Again That This Happened, Take Care Rebecca, Failed x

another great peice, im sorry you had to experiance such things, but we learn from our experianes dont we? but like i said, great job.

Hi thanks for commenting on my poem. I am returning the favor and commenting on yours. I see my ex with my ex bffl everyday. He was my second love. My first love is still in love with me and when I told him I would love him forever I meant it. I love with all my heart. I will write more poems. Only if I had more confidence though. w/b

This is a great poems.I miss my ex alot,and he hurt me SO bad.He was my everything I guess,but ill eventually get over him,just like you said...And you will too.
Ty for the comment.
Keep writing poems..
<3Shanna

Hey,
Sup? Not much here...I totally loved your poem. The way I feel for my ex...as you probably know...we are still friends...but I wish more...I hope I do get over him!..hit me back...bye...MUAH!

nice poems!..thanks for the comment on mine..

awsome keep up the good work :)

wow...great peom full of alot of emotion...keep it up because your poems are great

dude u really shuldn rite in ur own comment thing, lol .. j/p ... well this is a great poem .. almost like my relationship .. u know until it ended lol well gud luk 2 u n da luky special u hook up wit nx!! xoXox peace