Comments : Forgive me Father (im sorry if this affends you)

  • 12 years ago

    by jennifer

    I really liked this poem even though I believe in god myself it doesn't offend me at all everyone feels there own way about one thing or the other.. and in alot of ways this poem was the truth who does god believe in I really liked that part anyway I gave it a five.. and try to find your belief in yourself.. great writing in this very powerful

  • 12 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    ok...wow, you did an excellent job portraying this poem...i don't know if i should believe the way i do, my parents know and they dislike it to the fullest but I used to be Atheist, i now, believe in God for a lot of the things I have overcame, however, being bisexual and acceptive to interracial couples as well as doing a lot of the things i have done would equal sin. However, we all sin my dear and it's ok, you don't go to hell for sins, otherwise, there would be no one in heaven. As for the Bible's statements, i believe they are contradictions and I know I am not alone in that belief. if God does love and accept all then why does the Bible portray negative beliefs of gays and all of that...you bring up great topics in your poem, however, i want you to know you are not alone in your voice of opinion. Believe the way you want, judgement day holds what God truly wants, no one can tell us otherwise. i do love your poem and you defently deserve a 5 from me!! and now i will stop rambling.lol

    God Bless
    Love Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by vannesa

    i really liked ur poem i feel the same way alot of the times and im gay so i have even deeper feelings... but this poem made me happy and good job on writing it

  • 12 years ago

    by Shawnda

    Your poem was very well written. And Im not gonna preach but please read the Bible it answered alot of questions I had about him. And every point you brought up can be answered by the Bible someway somehow. Please just keep your faith, the last thing we need is Satan getting another innocent soul.

    LOTS OF LUV
    SHAWNDA

  • 12 years ago

    by Shelby G.

    First poem in a long time that i want to read twice and once more. you've got a knack for this. this poem is so truly amazing and wonderly jaw dropping, i read the whole thing in awe with just the way you wrote it. deffinatly a poem that shall not forget for a long long time.. and ya know what? I agree with every last word in this poem, no questions asked. a 5 out of 5

    -Church

  • this poems very unique.
    i'd give it a 3.

  • 12 years ago

    by broken angel

    H ell yeah! This poem stirs the mind, and the only people who would vote you a 1 are the type of people who are close-minded and irogant. This poem is an eye-opener and it should be read by way more people! I love it! You really just...GOD D AMN! It's just so perfect! 5/5
    Luv always, KT

  • 12 years ago

    by shae r

    wow..this is all my feelings towards god* wrapped up into 1 poem, great job. i thought i was lyk the only one that fealt this way because every one that ive confided in about my feelings toward the subject gets up me and calls me a satinist...ne hu great job, 5/5

    a point i would have made tho is if god was so great and there was such a great place called heaven then wouldnt he be as so kind to let us stay there rather than 2 let us suffer here on earth...

  • 12 years ago

    by LeXi

    I LOVE this poem. it has a lot of meaning. keep it up! 5/5. deserves every vote it gets!

  • 11 years ago

    by Rawr

    Wow... that is amazing. I love it. I really agree with it too. I have questioned god's existance so many times that I truely do not believe in heaven or hell anymore... I don't really believe in anything anymore except love and hate and every other emotion that has filled my soul. I really loved this poem. It's great

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I love this poem, very amazing, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Sad But True

    Dark but very good use of words. I ask similar questions sometimes when the rules of a cruel society bounds us to earth shattering pain.

  • 10 years ago

    by Becca

    Wow. That was powerful. I mean, I'm a christian but I wasn't offended. You feel like this and that's alright, I just hope God truly does find his way back into your life.

    Good luck, God bless

  • 10 years ago

    by musiqlover015

    I'm a Christian and I didn't really get offended because I realized that the first six satnzas remind me of the times that I've doubted my faith... I didn't get offended by the rest because I realize what you're saying is true in a way... alot of people like to say things and follow religious dogmas set my "leaders" who don't abide themselves... I also realize how hard it is to believe in something that is not only hard to understand, but jhard to learn about... everyone sits down with their own separate beliefs.... I like your poem nonetheless, it was quite thought-provoking

  • 9 years ago

    by Kenny

    Woah! this poem is really unique, honestly, im not offended by the way though i believe in God, coz u have ur own way of lyf and beliefs, after all, who cares. . . just great. . . in some ways you expressed your thoughts, at least your brave enough, and if God knows this, he won't be mad I tell you, he'll just tell you something. . . by the way, some wrong doings aren't be coz of God, its humans mistakes

    GReat!!

  • 9 years ago

    by sweet escape

    100% agree with you there.

  • 9 years ago

    by Brianna

    Wow,this is an amazing poem, and it truly shows how you feel, which is very unique. Great Job. It realy made me think.