I really liked this poem even though I believe in god myself it doesn't offend me at all everyone feels there own way about one thing or the other.. and in alot of ways this poem was the truth who does god believe in I really liked that part anyway I gave it a five.. and try to find your belief in yourself.. great writing in this very powerful
ok...wow, you did an excellent job portraying this poem...i don't know if i should believe the way i do, my parents know and they dislike it to the fullest but I used to be Atheist, i now, believe in God for a lot of the things I have overcame, however, being bisexual and acceptive to interracial couples as well as doing a lot of the things i have done would equal sin. However, we all sin my dear and it's ok, you don't go to hell for sins, otherwise, there would be no one in heaven. As for the Bible's statements, i believe they are contradictions and I know I am not alone in that belief. if God does love and accept all then why does the Bible portray negative beliefs of gays and all of that...you bring up great topics in your poem, however, i want you to know you are not alone in your voice of opinion. Believe the way you want, judgement day holds what God truly wants, no one can tell us otherwise. i do love your poem and you defently deserve a 5 from me!! and now i will stop rambling.lol
Your poem was very well written. And Im not gonna preach but please read the Bible it answered alot of questions I had about him. And every point you brought up can be answered by the Bible someway somehow. Please just keep your faith, the last thing we need is Satan getting another innocent soul.
First poem in a long time that i want to read twice and once more. you've got a knack for this. this poem is so truly amazing and wonderly jaw dropping, i read the whole thing in awe with just the way you wrote it. deffinatly a poem that shall not forget for a long long time.. and ya know what? I agree with every last word in this poem, no questions asked. a 5 out of 5
H ell yeah! This poem stirs the mind, and the only people who would vote you a 1 are the type of people who are close-minded and irogant. This poem is an eye-opener and it should be read by way more people! I love it! You really just...GOD D AMN! It's just so perfect! 5/5
Luv always, KT
wow..this is all my feelings towards god* wrapped up into 1 poem, great job. i thought i was lyk the only one that fealt this way because every one that ive confided in about my feelings toward the subject gets up me and calls me a satinist...ne hu great job, 5/5
a point i would have made tho is if god was so great and there was such a great place called heaven then wouldnt he be as so kind to let us stay there rather than 2 let us suffer here on earth...
Wow... that is amazing. I love it. I really agree with it too. I have questioned god's existance so many times that I truely do not believe in heaven or hell anymore... I don't really believe in anything anymore except love and hate and every other emotion that has filled my soul. I really loved this poem. It's great
I'm a Christian and I didn't really get offended because I realized that the first six satnzas remind me of the times that I've doubted my faith... I didn't get offended by the rest because I realize what you're saying is true in a way... alot of people like to say things and follow religious dogmas set my "leaders" who don't abide themselves... I also realize how hard it is to believe in something that is not only hard to understand, but jhard to learn about... everyone sits down with their own separate beliefs.... I like your poem nonetheless, it was quite thought-provoking
Woah! this poem is really unique, honestly, im not offended by the way though i believe in God, coz u have ur own way of lyf and beliefs, after all, who cares. . . just great. . . in some ways you expressed your thoughts, at least your brave enough, and if God knows this, he won't be mad I tell you, he'll just tell you something. . . by the way, some wrong doings aren't be coz of God, its humans mistakes