Comments : The Red, White And The Blue

  • 12 years ago

    by kim

    Wow! I like ALL your poems..you're a brilliant writer!! Hope everythings ok, email me if u wana at Sexikim_69@hotmail.com
    Take care xxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by ~SaD-T3aRs~

    THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM I ENJOYED READING IT ITS GREAT I LOVE IT... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
    -CRAZYSHORTY-

  • 12 years ago

    by SweetDreamer

    A very well written poem. It's very touching how you feel about your country, you obviously love it very much. Nice work! If you have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx.

  • 12 years ago

    by Billy Lei

    Wow, this poem touch me, it really did. this is an amazing poem. keep it up...plz

  • 12 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    so true, its all to true, good write. it is truly patriotic. good job. keep it up.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oh ..my gosh!! That was so mind blowing..this has got to be one of my favorite poems..The way you write and your way with words is magnificent! You have touched me deeply with this poem and its so great to see another person speack so kindly of our country! Amazing job!!

  • 12 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    "The farmers and the workers
    Who planted freedom's seed."
    That was my favorite part. Obviously, this poem will make the majority of Americans choke up due to nationalism...but I liked this poem because the expression, flow, and harmony all worked together. I probably would have even liked it if I wasn't American.
    Thanks though, because I have some friends that are fighting in Iraq right now; and they would love to able to read this.
    --Christa//No Motiv?

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachael

    Mark, this poem is amazing...a lot of people lose sight of what's really important, I'm glad to see you haven't! People are quick to judge the President and the decisions he makes but they fail to realize that the reason they are able to do that is because of the freedom that our country is built on...thank you so much for reminding us! Great work, definitely a 5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Krista

    this was an awsome poem i can not express just how good it was. keep up the good work

  • 10 years ago

    by Zack O.o

    I dont get how white means immigrants but otherwise cool nice job