Comments : Within it's Hands

  • 14 years ago

    by Tina

    WOW, is all i can say. that was amazing. in my opinion, i do understand and im glad i got to read a poem like that. good job

  • 14 years ago

    by Andrea

    its not confusing at all. i love it! you did an amazin job writing this!

  • 14 years ago

    by tormented

    It was good, it feels good to read your poems, its almost like i can hear your voice reading them, and when i hear that i know im not alone, and i know its all alright. your my best friend. and i love you!

  • 14 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Thats Really GOOD! I have really liked all your poems, you have HEAPS of talent and NEVER forget it!! Keep writing!!
    luv kt.

  • 14 years ago

    by Taylor

    This is great! i love it! seriously this is very creative! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 14 years ago

    by mosha

    hey thats a really good poem liked it a lot and i understood it pretty well i hope someday a person like you will come to mexico and teach this spoiled brats bout life and i hope i could have a friend that thinks the same way as you and me im only 12 years old and actually understand te way you are feeling i hope you write more poems like that see ya..!!!!

    love mosha (yeah i know thats a really weird name haha)

  • 14 years ago

    by Bleeding Mascara

    Whoa! I like. Read some of my new ones!

  • 14 years ago

    by Jessica

    Beautiful, but I hate feeling that you have all of this hurt inside of you. Just remember, even if everything seems bad and your fault, people still love you, like me and God, and will always love you even after you're gone! *hug* Hope you see that, lots of luv
    Jezika