Comments : Perish-Scope

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin

    This is about how when you meet or see somone who you consider to be for whatever reason, less fortunate than you, it can and should make you appreciate the good things in your life.

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Actually, I think that was well-expressed by the poem itself, Kevin. There's a dignity in the rhyme scheme (and the message) that lends an almost axiomatic aspect to the poem. I very much enjoy this.

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    interesting and very creative. i like the meaning behind this of appreciation for ones self, the things we forget to be thankful for. I thought it was quite interesting how the single I in the poem stood out...why did you decide to write it like that...just curious?

    Love Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by clevername

    interesting... makes u think some... well done