Lost angel

by tIrEd BoY wItH wIrEd EyEs   Feb 11, 2005


I'm a lost angel trying to find the steps to heaven but it is leading me to the doors of hell there they wait for me to come but i always turn away i try to help but i cant help i always mess up I've seen hanging bodies and blood filled rooms i have heard the screams of the fallen angles come down on me I'm a lost angel going in the wrong direction but soon enough ill make it to the steps of heaven

by David

comment me on this please

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by KIMMY

    IT IS A GOOD POEM!! BUT I THINK THAT YOU REALLY MEANT IT!!! IT SEEMS LIKE YOU WROTE IT FOR THE HELL OF IT!!! BUT KEEP TRYING!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Red Tears Of The Soul

    Very well written, although I can't get over the non-use of comma's and periods. Ah well, I'll get over, the use of it being a short story is very intriguing. Haven't seen that type of style in a while. Keep up the good work ^_^x

  • 17 years ago

    by No one feels as I do

    Thanks for commenting mine, I really loved this poem. Its actually one I can compare my life to. Keep up the good writing, and message me or something.

  • 18 years ago

    by Eraklis

    Loved the whole lost angel theme great work, dark with meaning...Amazing

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    loooooooool...u made my eyse roll up...niiiice writing but pleeeeeeeeease put some things like those ,,,,,,,,,,

    Lool,u have ur style !!! i like it

    Peace
    Darla

Read All Comments (6)

More Poems By tIrEd BoY wItH wIrEd EyEs