Hey nice work. I really liked this poem and the originality. Also welcome to the site! I'm sure i'll be reading more from you in the future.

HEY, GREAT POEM.. IGAVE YOU A 5/5
MUCH LOVE
~*~HEATHER~*~

This poem left me in a state of calmness-good job

loved it keep up the good work :)

~Xiaoyu~

gj luved it 5/5

another awesoqme poem..you have a serious talent
love
shannon

another wonderful poem:) You have true talent

beatiful

Hey, thanks for commenting on my poem. You have talent and imagination. Nice one, James.

James
I really thought that was a great poem . It flowed well, except this part didn't seem to "fit" in this poem.

falling pieces of soft rain
from the clouds they do Wyne

That kinda threw it off a bit, buy all in all I'd have to say it was still great.
Take care & God bless!