I like this poem, very unique and very well writtin. Please give me some advice on my poems, I'm new to all of this!

Hey Josh, well I can't really give you much advice but I can tell you a little secret hehe my trick to write these poems is mostely that I think about events that happened to me and I express myself using poems and making what happened sound better.

this idnt my poem but my friend made it up and she wanted me to post it for her

I think if a guy ever said that to me...ID Die OF happiness:) lol
great poem!

<3
shari

ah yes the pains of love - nice - keep up the nice writes