Comments : My urge to Chain Smoke

  • 12 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Really well made. Nice.
    -A

  • 12 years ago

    by Chloe

    Great work. Nice flow, perfect words; keep it up! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Very creative!! I thought it was going to be about peer pressure but i was impressed :) nice job! and thank u for the comments, as for the one about the guy u love but live to far away, babe, theres no such thing. emotional and mental connections are like no other! i'm with a wonderful guy online (from this site) and couldnt be happier but i understand if the distant is to much for you or him, it is for a lot of people but i'd advise you to let him know!

    Much love,
    Heather
    ps 5

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I wont cry because it's over,
    I'll smile because it happened...

    Famous quote from an author, i think it was Dican or the Latin Father Exorcist known as Father X. But that was definately a quote that i heard from a famous philospher.

    Good poem though, i gave it a four because i felt it lacked something...i think it was the beats, if you count them then are way off each other.