OMG i absolutely love this poem Wow!! all except stanza, i would change the last line to
but she never measured up to bar

but its your poem, i absolutely love the aging of the girl and the ending was shocking! and i hope it doesnt happen to you hun!-5!

God bless
Love Heather.

no......no..... thats not whats gonn happen to you....if god intended it to be that way he woulda had you do it already....we all care about you you know.... just keep up the good writing and stay strong.

oh sorry..i meant the last stanza* and yeah jescelle is right, we dont want it to happen to you! stay strong!

wow a really great poem
one of the best i think ive ever read
truly powerful stuff
xxxkeep writingxxx

noo neverr that wont happen to you please babe stay strong for me </3. i need you here you cant go. i hope we are still best friends, even if we arnt i will always think of you as one. you are the best hun! ilysm! .. *ftpc*

love you always,
Sarah

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oh.... anddd amazing write by the way hun. please stay. i cant let anything happen to you. please.... i need you ily... :(...
please never go. </3

please dont let it happen to you. Cutting is hard to stop but it will just give it time. eventually the pain will be over (hopefully)

This poem is amazing...
i am definitly adding you 2 my favorite poets..
you are really good..
keep writing..

comment back if you get a chance...

xoxo leanna xoxo