WOW. I am in tears right about now. The dad thing is a really touchy subject for me but this....this was amazingly written and i am sorry for the loss of your father he would have been proud of this poem I loved it i mean WOW.
take care and God bless
Scooby

very nice , i can almost feel ur pain remember ur dad will never fade
u know he'll always be there for u
as long as you have him too
hans

I'm so sorry to hear about your father.. a wonderful poem that gets a 5

I can relate to that so0o0o much... I lost my father to cancer when I was 13... I'm soo sorry for your loss R.I.P

i think that is a beautiful poem and i am sorry for your loss, but it is better to know your dad then to never know him at all and if u would like to contact me here is my email Fes_sk8er31@hotmail.com

Oh!!! My, I lost my father 15 years ago and
your poem is the same emotion I feel everyday.
The pain fades but my memories stay strong.
Thank you for sharing a wonderful write. ( :

Your Such An Amazing Writer,
Keep it Up.

Failed

sweet poem luved it good job!!!
luv ya!!

wow.. i'm sorry for what you had to go through.. it'll be ok though.. nice job on the poem tho, really powerful.

vedali

Heartfelt written..
No strings attach, the poem
moves on its own.
;)

So sorry for ur loss. Very beautiful and sad at the same time. Very well written! If u would check out me new one My Blessing Thanx! Always enjoy reading ur poems!

Sad poem but it doesn't flow very well.

Everytime I read this it gets better and better well done again... sorry for your loss

my eyes started to water very emotional poem...i hope u are ok ?

be safe and keep up the good work..take care

Wow that must of been terrible to lose your father, i'v onnly lost grandparents. I'm sorry about his death though. Its a great poem however i think it puts ur thoughts down well. Great job keep it up!
~Mollir

great poem, very sad though... sorry for your lost... Check out some of mine if you ever get the chance to.

this is so sad, i have lost too so i can relate, and its so heartfelt i really feel for you. keep writing you are very good.
Best wishes Doreen. i give this a 5 because i felt your pain.

aww I'm so sorry about your dad...but i'm sure heaven is a wonderful place so at least you can be happy he's there:) and you can see him again someday! hope you cheer up and things get better, and that was a really beautiful poem keep it up! >5/5<
xxxChristinaxxx

Beautiful... sad... but beautiful... 5/5. Hope you'll reach 100!

wow loved it sooooooo powerful xxxxx