Wow, amazing poem, fantastic format and very powerful, I like the emotions that come across whilst reading, well done indeed 5/5

This is a great poem and has been written really well. 5/5. Love Emma xxx

~ excellent poem, nice. don't be sad
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

sorry about your friend i know how that feels, just remember that shes in a better place now looking at u and she'd want you to be happy very nice poem

Hey sad poem but really good. Thanks for commenting on my poem. That was sweet.

great work...
but life dies...we all go one day...it was her choice to leave the world...

wow great job!! keep it up!!

.x.Jessie.x.

I know exactly how you feel hun.

They say that they would be here
But when i need them the most
They are out partying
They say that i should go with them

Felt that many times. I hope you feel better soon hun.

Love,
Tiff

aawww hun, im sorry if you feel that way, i know it sucks.........but great poem, keep it up =)

The words in this poem are strong and the emotion is strong as well keep it up!

take care

commenting again I just reread it and it is even better I loved these lines
But when i need them the most
They are out partying
They were good :D well done

loved it!! gave it a five!!

Sigh.
I can relate to this one.
Its Good.

very emotional...good to see another indian on this site...hope this is just a fictional poem and is not true...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

wow, a great peom, very sad and powerful though but i can easily relate. take care and keep up the good work

Nice feeling, I really liked it. 5/5.

wow.. im sorry about ur friend... dont be sad... it was an awesome poem tho!! great word usage!! keep it up!

nice poem. Sure hope it's not true, though.

Still, great job.

Keep writing!!!

kick ass poem....5/5

a bold outpouring of feelings, I am listening or rather reading your blood on the screen