Comments : Imagine Me There...(this is nasty)

  • 12 years ago

    by Shaneese

    damn that makes me horny lol well lovly written and i like it.......holla back ~*shaneese*~

  • 12 years ago

    by Holla_bac_kidd

    that was good keep doin wut ya do

  • 11 years ago

    by Shadawn

    I really liked how u wrote evrything out step by step and other stuff. but, good poem anyway Serenity

  • 11 years ago

    by Fern

    ..........

  • 11 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. amazing everything was so detailed, and definalty worth reading... keep writting .. 5/5.. please read and comment on some of my poems, kirsty palmer xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. amazing everything was so detailed, and definalty worth reading... keep writting .. 5/5.. please read and comment on some of my poems, kirsty palmer xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Chemistry

    I love it! Very nicely written, though was that really her dad?
    *I'm quite confused
    Nevertheless it was great. Still a 5/5!

  • 10 years ago

    by apey

    Omg tihs is by far the best poem ive read on this site its so detailed and wow i love it so what if its long its AWESOME!!!!!! i wish i could write as good as you omg that would be a gift your so lucky!!!!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Awesome poem good job

    ashleigh

  • 10 years ago

    by LostSoul

    I love it.and keep it up.

  • 9 years ago

    by xXxVampxXx

    5/5

  • Uhhh who's it for your husband or father but really great i was shocked though cause it was really really detailed it was like you were writing it during your (fun time) haha

    Great Work