Comments : Our Playground

  • 12 years ago

    by Amit

    oh what a nice and organized write! beautifully done! wonderful write amanda! rhyme was excellent~
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 12 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Awwww! that's so cute! great work!

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    (¸.·´ (¸.·´`·-----~> God Bless
    The Heart That Touches Yours,
    Heather Michelle Craig
    <333 Shauns Forever <333

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    OMG i hope i can be as good a poet as you one day! deffinately adding u 2 my faves. Wow! Thanks for the comment and i'm glad i made you smile :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Amanda, This is truly a beautiful poem. Our childhood is precious, something we always remember. hugs, lots of love, **Ann**

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah

    You too, thanks for the comment.

    Sarah <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awsum! Great work and keep it up! 5 stars! *****

  • 12 years ago

    by Tinkerbelle

    Love it.Keep up the good work.I'm adding u to my fav's.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    What a charming trip down memory lane! That was lovely *smiles*

  • 12 years ago

    by Lithium

    thats a really understandable poem u've pointed out the high and low lights of life and life as a child its fantasic luv sam xox

  • 12 years ago

    by M J U

    Your writing attracts a lot of visitors. A true reflection on how well you do and how much it is appreciated. Keep it up.

  • 12 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Beautiful poem. I love the way it flows. Keep it up.~Red

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow....this brought back so many memories, I loved going to the park! I still do, it's just not as peaceful as I remember it! I really enjoyed this, especially the part about the hot slide! It didn't matter if I knew it was hot, I'd still slide again! That was the life! Great job, and thanx for the comment, I appreciate it loads~Holly

    P.S. I am very honored....lol :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    wonderful peom, really happy one, great job! 5/5!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

  • 12 years ago

    by brooke christina

    that was good. i always go on and check if someone has commented on my poems. i started to get some when i first joined, but after that i didn't get any. so thanks

  • 12 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Sweet, very sweet.....well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Becky drake

    Beautiful.............simply beautifful, you are so very talented, I felt like a child running through the playground while I read this, so i read it a few times, just to feel that feeling......I would be honored if you could check out a few of mine, they go from sad, to ditty, and almost everything in between, I usually write more dedication style, please let me know what you think.....great job, off to read some more of your work...love ya becky

  • 12 years ago

    by ~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~

    very intersting! i like it-like it! 25/5

  • 12 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    BEAUTIFUL!!! wow this may be such a girl thing to say but those last lines almost made me cry:) I wish i could go back, life was so easy and simple! Anyway you really brought this poem to life, very descriptive and flowed amazingly!!! Loved it!5

  • 12 years ago

    by Amba

    You made me think of when i was little, even though im still only 15, but it makes me want to go on one of those spiney things and be yonug again, when nothing else matterd.
    You are so talented.. It was such a good poem. I really enjoyed reading it
    5/5
    Xox Bam