WOW!WOW!WOW! This was so powerful! Keep up the great work!~5/5~
Love alwayz....
Haily
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love the repition, u shd do more poems like this! ur very talented keep it up x

wow, an amazing piece and a great topic! please keep writing you're great!
Lmay xXx

simple but very powerful read story teller of Fate and Water I think you will like them both

Exceptional. Love this one.

I like this poem, it has an interesting perspective and it flows nicely. I am kind of compulsive about using good grammar, so I've got to point out that on line 28 it should be through, not threw. Keep up the good work! :-)

Stunning

I love it. Check me out
~~(~~Morana~~(~~

Great poem. Nice rhyming, wonderfully chosen title, great repititon... 5/5.

Great Poem. I love it.

Wow excelent. Truth. I loved your poem.

I don't see how the same thing over and over is powerful but maybe they see something I don't. I can't stand rhyming poems either, so in that, I'm opinionated. The breathing is a little off, I found myself short of breath some lines and breathing easy in others, it threw the poems beat off.

Wow i love this one its amazing how you thought of that!! gud job^_^