This was really good. I can only wonder how this concept came to ur head : )

great story 5/5

WOW.............fu(king deadly poem................WOW..............such a good story...............thats the type of shi+ im in2!!!!!!1 WOW.......................*WOW*

wiggy... thats a trippy poem. i liked it. great job!

I gave you a five just because I loved the twist at the end so much great job!!!

wow this was freaky...lol...i liked it...5/5 gosh how scary...lol...nice job..luv ya mwah

-kayla-