Another good one....I've never tried writing in a poetic form! I'm always in awe after reading one~Holly

wonderful write heather, this is simply brilliant...5/5

Amazing, yet again. Keep it up girl, you are really talented. 5/5.
--Take Care--
Always, Danielle.

Beautifuly wrought. Each line was laced with an excited anticipation.

Heather, I've never tried this form of writing, but you sure did a great job. I'll have to remember this and try it sometime. Enjoyed. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

oOoo, that's new. :)
Very well structured. Hehe, I'm lovin' it!

kool, i learning about poetry and get to read good poetry at the same time! idk i just really keep thinking about angel's lately. i write what comes.

~PLP~ Lil slam~ hugs & love

heather your poems always leave me speechless, i never really know what to say....except wow.....you have so much talent, keep it up...take care *hugs*

-brittnay- ((5/5))

thats really cool keep it up!

Nice Heather!!! I can't do all those different types of poems...I have tried and I get too damn frustrated! LoL Nice write....:) Hope all is well...Take care...5/5

Very nicely written.... It's prob one of the first triolets I've read that was put together so well... Def a 5/5 (take care) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

I liked the poem, i didn't really like the format. I was never a person for this type of format and i never really liked how it repeated itself in such a short time, i feel you can express yourself a lot more with more lines to work with.

I gave it a five/five.

Love you Lots,
Shaun Aka Dark Savior

wow! amazing! you love those cool styles that i don't understand!!! he he
great one
5!
Sammi xxx

I really miss your poems and your comments Heather. This is a lovely Triolet, good work keep it up