wow, great poem....this is so powerful. It brought tears to my eyes to think one day I will have to face this, also.

Anyway, you've done a good job with the rhyming, because normally I'm not a rhyming fan....hopefully people continue to rate this what it deserves (5/5)

Hey, really good. I liked it. Thanks for the comment. 5/5

~no more

Very heartfelt in itself, but it needs more work. The flow especially. Try to shorten the middle paragraph because it's so much longer than the other ones, and at that point it's easy to stumble while reading this poem. Over all, I liked your use of words. Keep writing and take care,
Satuxxa

its really well done. but you should elaborate on what the "place" is. I;m guessing its his old home, but it's unclear. very well written though and full of emotion. You're grandaddy is there with you in your heart, watching over you with love.
~Freak~

I think this was a good poem to honor the one yopu lost he would be very proud I am sure...

Wonderful poem, I agree with Robert, wonderful dedication. Take care, and thank you for the comment

From just looking at the titles I can see that you were close to your grandfather and really miss him. I hope everything is alright. I liked this poem but not as much as some others you wrote. I love it when people reference to other things like songs and other poems. It makes me glad that you did that. When I see something like that, if I know the song then I think of it but if I don't then I look it up. Good job though. 4/5. kilman = David B.

This is a really great, but sad poem. I am very lucky the only grandfather I have lost is one that I didn't know very well. I sympathise with you though, I don't know what I'd do if I lost my poppy. :(

This poem was so sad. Try and stay strong, I know how you feel. Your a great writer, thanks for your comments also, they mean alot to me! xX

wow thats such a sad poem its so deep.
it is gr8 has so much emotion.
keep up the writing.

Jacs
xxx

great job. lots of emotion. 5/5
please read my poems and if you could would you give me some advice on mine?

In reading this one can see that you kind of HAD to write this all down. Some times stuff like this can come out and that's just that but this is beautifully written and so heartfelt. Beautifully done.

Though I do have a suggestion:
"your" 'I know your gone' should be you're
"I miss the way you made me laugh
I think of you when i hear that song
"How Great Thou Art" now makes me cry
And even though I know your gone"
This stanza threw the flow off just a bit. Well just the last 2 lines really....I got caught up on the last 2 lines while reading this. Maybe you could just take the title out and leave that song to the reader's imagination..>What ever you do it's still perfect....

Aaaaaw that is so beautiful i just lost my grampa a couple of days ago and i.........its just a wonderful poem, you have a great style

Wow that was really deep, it was truely a poem from the heart and not just for "public likeings"

You showed that you really loved him, and such a great person he was, my best friend's grandpa just passed away today, and she was so upset, and my grandma is really sick, I'm worried i'll be writing a poem like this soon, about her being gone, hang in there, and think of all the special memories you two have shared, he's in a better place, 5/5

Jess

Beautiful, sweet poem.

5/5

[Tragic]

I just read your poem 'searching'. it is very good. you have a similar writing style to my own and tou only a baby. keep it up ill be checking back often. can i add you to my favourite authors? ill wait until you give me permission before adding you.