Comments : What they see.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amit

    Nicely Expressed.

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love, Amit.

  • 12 years ago

    by shannon

    hey.... i thought it was good.... i can relate a lot....thanks for commenting on my poems
    //.:amanda:.\\

  • 12 years ago

    by AJ

    It's really good. I liked it. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    well...this is a very interesting poem. Hard to say how I really feel because honestly I'm speechless. I really liked it. 5/5, for sure.
    I loved the form and sentence fluency, job well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by destiny

    it's AWESOME-i feel that way right now....but anyways, i hope you never change-& thanx for the comment on my poem...PEACE! -_-

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    well i understand ur point of view, but it seems a little choppy. i can't tell which stanza its which, and i can't tell what parts are supposed to rhyme. it was a good part, but you need to work a little on formatting

  • 12 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Hmmm
    If you really want the truth, I must admit that I didn't really like the poem because the flow is so choppy. I got lost several times and had to re-read it quite a few times. But, the idea is still very good, though the poem needs work. Work on the lines, because some are so much longer than the others. Maybe even divide the poem up, that would help. Over all, the poem was okay, but it needs more work. Keep writing, you have some great ideas!
    Satuxxa

  • 12 years ago

    by Nici

    An unusual layout to this poem, but that just added to its value. There was still a flow, by the use of description.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

  • 12 years ago

    by Shy

    Nice 4/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    You got some talent! i gotta hand it to ya! this poem is awesome I loved it!! 5/5!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Carmen

    that was great. whatd he do though?