Nicely Expressed.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

hey.... i thought it was good.... i can relate a lot....thanks for commenting on my poems
//.:amanda:.\\

It's really good. I liked it. 5/5

well...this is a very interesting poem. Hard to say how I really feel because honestly I'm speechless. I really liked it. 5/5, for sure.
I loved the form and sentence fluency, job well done.

it's AWESOME-i feel that way right now....but anyways, i hope you never change-& thanx for the comment on my poem...PEACE! -_-

well i understand ur point of view, but it seems a little choppy. i can't tell which stanza its which, and i can't tell what parts are supposed to rhyme. it was a good part, but you need to work a little on formatting

Hmmm
If you really want the truth, I must admit that I didn't really like the poem because the flow is so choppy. I got lost several times and had to re-read it quite a few times. But, the idea is still very good, though the poem needs work. Work on the lines, because some are so much longer than the others. Maybe even divide the poem up, that would help. Over all, the poem was okay, but it needs more work. Keep writing, you have some great ideas!
Satuxxa

An unusual layout to this poem, but that just added to its value. There was still a flow, by the use of description.

Keep Writing
Nici

Nice 4/5

You got some talent! i gotta hand it to ya! this poem is awesome I loved it!! 5/5!!

that was great. whatd he do though?