Comments : Life Without You!

  • 12 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    Im soooo sorry about your brother and i hope he will be ok! Great poem by the way! I liked it a lot!
    Best Wishes,.....
    Haily
    XOXOXOXOOX

  • 12 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    im soo sorry about your brother as well. I think the message was very sweet and amazing.. but i think you could loose the repition in 4th line because it really doesnt fit in with your stanzas...
    my deepest wishes go out to your brother
    take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Anna

    this poem is rlly sweet, i hope ur brother gets better as it sounds as though your rlly close. check out my poems :). love ya *Anna* xxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I'm truely sorry but your poem wqas beautiful... I hope your brother gets better coz I know i'd die without my brother's!!
    May God be with you and your family.....

  • 12 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    that was very well written i like the style. keep up the good work.
    ~Freak~

  • 12 years ago

    by NoPatience

    omg this poem was so touching and sad. im sorry about ur brother. 5/5 feelbetter

  • 12 years ago

    by W H O R E

    Aww... *hug* Im so sorry about your brother.. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    wow, just reading you comment at the top made me sad the poem holds feeling and im sorry about your brother.

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by steve

    beautiful poem to your brother......

  • 12 years ago

    by LoVeAbLeShOrTie

    You are a great writer..5/5 for sure..keep up the great work..
    *~*cryingontheinside*~*
    xoxoxo

  • this was a good poem it expressed what they felt which is hard for some poeople to do

  • 12 years ago

    by Nikki

    ohhh this is such a gorgeous poem, you really have done a great job! it's very emotional

    take care of yourself xox

  • 12 years ago

    by Deathcanwait

    awwwwww :( its really sad but still beautiful. i really like it.

    <5

    Matt

  • 12 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Awww that's so sad!! I'm sorry to hear about your brother. I hope he is ok..

    Love much,
    Tiff

  • 12 years ago

    by Daniel Goding

    great poem very touching I loved it, Im truly sorry about your brother and hope that he will recover soon.
    P.S. thanks for all the comments it really means alot to mean Ill read most of yours later on I have an appointment I have to go to in 30 minutes.

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    nice poem :( and sad too. well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Carmen

    Aw...that reli shows how much u love yur brother

  • 12 years ago

    by shannon

    soooo goood!! 5.5 i enjoyed that!

    much love shannon

  • 12 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Great poem. Thanks for the comment and vote. And yes, that is me in the picture. <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Shadows Collide

    This is a very great for somebody of your age. It has a nice tempo to it