awww! thats soo sad, it sounds like you guys are really close, like me and my brother! Im sooo sorry that hes sick!! I'll pray for him!! 5/5 !! *KISSES*~Corrie

A nice dedication to a brother who you obviously love dearly.
One minor point would be that in the second line:
'Just would’t be the same'
would't is spelt wouldn't, an easy mistake to make.
That however does not detract from the overall poem.

Keep Writing
Nici

Aww. Very nice poem. Beautiful. I'm sorry about your brother. 5/5
Stay strong and keep writing.

-Ice

good poem 4
~Freak~

Very good lots of emotion

Thats the type of poem that i really like. Great job!

Sweet, beautiful and heartfelt. Wonderfully done.

It's a good poem, it's sad, but well written.. good job :)

hey christina, I loved this poem and I love my brother too. Thanks for sharing it with us. take care, Marjan

This is so sad, but it is beautiful. Keep it up!

hope everything improves.

really powerful...i hope ur bro gets better, and if you ever need to talk, email me at babygrlluvsyou35@hotmail.com
luvs always,
Ashli

I have an idea about what u are goin through, i watched my nanny die, its really hard, keep ur head up!

omg. this was great, i feel so bad for you though, that you have to go though that...i hope that he is doing ok...great job. keep writing

aw.. kinda sad!! but greatly written.. i'm so glad you have a good relationship with your brother!! that's awesome
great job
love always,
Abcede^,^

aw thats a sweet poem. your brother must have been happy when you read it to him/ or if you did lol! it was very touching 5/5

omg wow really thats so sad goood poem keep your chin up 5/5

omg </3 I hope he gets well, D= great poem though..

Sorry. =( But very good poem. 5/5

Very touching and good poem. I really liked the way you can make people feel for you with this one. That makes it a good poem.

~*~Christina~*~