Daniel, this is an awesome poem! I know I say this a lot, but the imagery is just so great! Thanks for commenting on my poem. Keep writing and best of luck if this poem was based on a real situation. Love is never easy.....
This is the first poem I've read from you but all I can say is 'wow'. I love your style of writing. You deffinatly have alot of talent and apparently alot of emotion as well. Please keep writing :) 5/5
O.O wow 5/5
This was SO great! I could actually feel the pain and loneliness like I was going through it O.O I love poems that I can actually feel while reading to the words =)
Great work ^.^