Comments : Darkend Souls

  • 12 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    Great poem. Very well done, it's amazing.
    Take care always,
    - Shell.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dangerous Angels

    wow....yet another great poem. I real admire your writing. I wish I could write something like this. Sometimes I feel like I just want to be dark, like, there's an evil lurking inside me that needs to escape. I want to keep reading your poems for inspiration. :) Keep it up! Seriously

  • 12 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    I like it of course.....

  • 11 years ago

    by Dianna M Tuohy

    Genius <333

  • 11 years ago

    by XxCrimsonxSinxX

    whoa this poem was awesome, ima add you to my fav's if you dont mind...

  • 11 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    wow, that has got to be one of the coolest poems I've ever read. Truely a work of art. Excellent job. <3333

  • 11 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    beautiful
    i really liked this poem, it was unique and very well written
    ~kris

  • 11 years ago

    by *Goshikku*

    EXTREGANT....thats was wonderful...i love it...the image of the words is so real...your words were perfect in describing what you wanted to show...the feeling i get from reading this is completely awsome...i feel as though i were in the arms of someone...like i felt what you wrote...

    Sorry if i went in to deep..i just wanted to say that was great ! ! !

    (read mine if you wish...they won't be as good at all, but i like to hear how i can improve)

    *smiles slightly showing teeth*

  • 11 years ago

    by Elynnka

    *jawdrop* ... *stares in awe* I love your imagination and the way you write your ideas down 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Wow....fantastic work - 5/5!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Boy

    Hmmm. intresting poem i like that

  • 9 years ago

    by Piece of Me

    Wow absolutely amazing wish i could write like that! keep it up!

  • 9 years ago

    by [[Get Ya Wicked On]]

    Twisted, I love it. -T. Jane

  • 9 years ago

    by Tylor delcourt

    In speachless

  • 9 years ago

    by B Rose

    Thats great. good at the rhyming and it has a great story line. i luved how you ended it.
    "once again he kissed me, this time i kissed back, two dark souls together, both evil and black" that was just a perfect finishing for this poem.

  • 9 years ago

    by regina

    That was good!

  • 9 years ago

    by NIDAL

    The poem is captivating...every time i wanted to stop reading...it drew me back into it....this poem has magical powers...dark and sinester....very enjoyable...flows very smoothly...keep it up..."read my Arabian sands" and "Gifts of Sorrow" vote and comments appreciated. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very beautiful Poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love this...i found the whole idea original and unique in concept. the imagery you created here was beautiful, really creates vivid pictures for the reader. flow was good throughout except for the line 'as he watched my body' no matter which way you pronounce it, body and me dont really rhyme, so that kind of throws the flow. apart from there however, i love this. beautifully dark and elegantly written.

  • 9 years ago

    by xXxVampxXx

    OMG so wickedly insane i cant even believe it so well done unbelivably well done