Comments : A girl dying of cancer

  • 13 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Aww so beautifully sad, JJ. keep up the great work! 5/5

    Love, Heather.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Very sweet. It is a beautiful write I agree.


  • 13 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    So sad JJ. Very touching write. Great job. hugs, love *Ann*

  • 13 years ago

    by ~*You are my only one*~

    O wow! This poem is really great. It made me cry...and I read it to my friend and then she cried too. Keep up the writing I'll be back to read your future poems! By the way thanks for the comment!

  • 13 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Go JJ! This poem was great! Congrats on the front page! Keep it up! (",)


  • 13 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    =''''{ I'm cryin. That was so sad. It's very beautiful. Great job, keep it up. Peace, //Ari\\

  • 13 years ago

    by BLaCK_RoSeS

    snif....great poem
    great ending
    great rhymes
    PeaCe. LoVe, PrOsPeRiTy

  • 13 years ago

    by Erinn

    Hey that was a great poem... Keep up the good work and visit my poems sometimes!! That was a very sad poem!! I CRIED:'''( 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Janine

    wow that poem was realli well written but is so sad at the same time. Gud job though.
    love me

  • 13 years ago

    by CynicxSincexBirth

    wow, thats sad. depressing, but in some cases true. very nice job.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kisa

    This is one of the most touching poems I've ever read. What made you write such a great poem? - Rox

  • 13 years ago

    by Solace

    Amazing.. nothing more I can really say.. Keep writing you have talent.. take care ((always) xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 13 years ago

    by Vanessa

    very sad but nice pt of view..5/5:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    excellent poem! it's so sad but yet she seems to have hope and bravery. thanks for the comment, it was a pleasure to read!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 13 years ago

    by Mark

    very sad, hope the girl can beat cancer, no matter how good heaven is or seems. one of my mates has cancer at the moment, so i can relate

    well written, take care

    love mark xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by umsheikha

    oh my god
    very nice;y wriiten

  • 13 years ago

    by Loulou

    Oh wow umm my cousin died from cancer and this brought it back excellent poem so sad