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Love is very confusing! Very well expressed! Keep it up! Well written poem! Take Care! Brooke~

I liked this poem, the message was heart felt it was kinda choppy for me but it was a good poem all and all. I gave it a 4...

Lovely poem...if you like suggestions for titles, I have one for this one - "Tattered Soul"

*shrugs* I liked it, good job.

Great expression! The mind and heart competing! God, don't I know what that's like! Amazing! 5/5 David! It's wonderful!