Kill me

by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~   Jun 3, 2005


Flames
Flames
Flames
burn the dread of life within
kill me
burn me
let I become one with the heat
let thy glow caress my body
take me away from the dreaded world I live in
Never mind the pain
I shall feel better
my life shall be over
use thy power
smolder me flames of doom
finish me off
I am already dead on the inside
i am dead where it counts!

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  • 17 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    Hellooooooooooo

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    Cooioioioioioioio

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    Oh yeah. Megan, I changed the pic for our profile since our name isn't "Mortimer" anymore. I hope that's ok.

    -Sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    Umm... I don't know Megan. I didn't really like it.

    WTF is cardool?

    -Sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    The repetition and wording was great, but I just didn't like your last line and maybe it's just me ... Keep writing though, i see potential. 4/5

    With all respect,
    Heather.

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