The one

by cooldude900   Jun 6, 2005


Baby can I tell you
How you make me feel
What I have inside my heart
Is oh so very real

The love that you have shown me
Every single day
I will cherish for my lifetime
And it will never go away

When I see you in the chat room
There's a smile upon my face
And when you say hello to me
My heart begins to race

How can just a single girl
A human thru and thru
Make me feel all you have
Well thats just because it's YOU

You are very special Love
No one could ever compare
The tears you put upon my face
Cuz only you could put them there

Never change the girl you are
Or the girl you have become
Because my dear inside my heart
You ARE the only one.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WELCOME TO THE CLUB!! :)

    Very sweet poem...though I have a suggestion...you shouldn't shorten words such as "thru" and "cuz" as that can some times make people think you are not a serious writer. Whether you are or not it will make people skip right over your poems. I don't read poems and/or comment on them when they have writing such as that within them.

    This poem was so sweet and nicely put.... :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    OK James that was awesome!!!!!!!!!
    really touching and great
    KEEP YOUR WORK
    GOOD LUCK
    Remember Me :P
    Nema
    XoXoXoX

  • 18 years ago

    by lover girl

    thats a really good poem. keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Hey Sexy. Great job on the poem. Keep up the great work.

    Ashley

  • 18 years ago

    by crissy abalos

    touching poem...luck gurl :) who is she?

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