Comments : The Day She Fell

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    OMG. I loved that!!!! Wow. You are so amazing. *Adds to favorites* This was excellent...Why is it untitled may I ask? It would stand out more with a name. Not to nag...=/ Take care xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by otto

    another good poem, like you writing style suggestion- in paragraph 5, and 6 the last line on both of them try use diferent words to protray the same meaning but it make it those lines flow better, not that the flow was good it was good it's just a suggestion
    your a great writer

  • 12 years ago

    by Lyla

    woah that was heavy.....so sad.....

  • 12 years ago

    by DANI

    hayley the poem writer!!! this poem is in my favorites!!! c u in skool!!! x.x.x.x.x.x.x.

  • 12 years ago

    by jencam

    amazing! this is truly terrific. Nice job!

  • wow that was tough i mean that was an awesome poem i mean well i dont know what i mean that poem was freakin awesome that was really good
    Dee