Comments : Pretend (ACROSTIC)

  • 12 years ago

    by ~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~

    very creative! 25/5 =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey i really liked this. It's different and great! Not been on here for a few days so i'll read some more of yours later. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Forever29

    Excellent, I love this! Very creative as well! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Hey this poem is great. Keep it up. Thanks for the comment on my poem~Red

  • 12 years ago

    by Becky drake

    excellent............you have so much talent, I love the style, and I loved the words, it was a romantic tune humming in my head. keep it up, love ya Becky

  • 12 years ago

    by M J U

    Another great piece of work Amanda. A+

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Awesome.....loved the flow and the words. Great job. hugs, love, Ann

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Great Job!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WooHoo Amanda! So sweet. But it's kind of sad though because you're only pretending. lol 5/5 I like.... :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jeff

    Great work in a kinda unique style.That is what poetry is supposed to be.Liberal.I loved your work.Jeff

  • 12 years ago

    by Lithium

    god i havn't seen on e of these poems in ages let alone one that rhymes i love what you did with this :) xox sam

  • 12 years ago

    by EoB

    I find this poem to be really good. The words you chose fit perfectly in the acrostic form. There is a lot of passion in it, and a depth to it that many poems lack.

    *Off to read more*

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Well done...I'm very impressed with this piece! I especially like this line"

    "Tell me those sweet lies that I need so desperately to hear"

    Although some of the thing's men say are quite untrue, they are so lovely to hear! This poem is jam packed with passion and deep feeling...Take care~Holly

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    As always, you never cease to amaze me with your beautiful writing.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 12 years ago

    by dandy

    Wow! I absolutely love this poem! It's like the reader can almost physically feel what you're describing. Awesome job; Wonderfully written! Thanks so much for commenting on my poem. Means a lot! Keep up the great work!

    ~dandy~

  • 12 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    Wow! i thought i was the only one who wrote in ryming acrostic! cool! yay!

    great poem
    ~SAMMI

  • 12 years ago

    by disenchanted

    Very Creative. A beautiful piece of Artwork!

    aMy

  • 12 years ago

    by Taylor Renee

    Wow, you really are an incredible writer. all of them are just wonderful. i wish i could write HALF as good as you can :D

  • 11 years ago

    by Knee

    Loved it alot
    keep it up :)