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by ~áƒ¦~ jeSSica ~áƒ¦~
very creative! 25/5 =)
Hey i really liked this. It's different and great! Not been on here for a few days so i'll read some more of yours later. :)
Excellent, I love this! Very creative as well! 5/5
by Red Charm
Hey this poem is great. Keep it up. Thanks for the comment on my poem~Red
by Becky drake
excellent............you have so much talent, I love the style, and I loved the words, it was a romantic tune humming in my head. keep it up, love ya Becky
by M J U
Another great piece of work Amanda. A+
by Ann Stareyes
Awesome.....loved the flow and the words. Great job. hugs, love, Ann
by Robert Gardiner
WooHoo Amanda! So sweet. But it's kind of sad though because you're only pretending. lol 5/5 I like.... :)
Great work in a kinda unique style.That is what poetry is supposed to be.Liberal.I loved your work.Jeff
god i havn't seen on e of these poems in ages let alone one that rhymes i love what you did with this :) xox sam
I find this poem to be really good. The words you chose fit perfectly in the acrostic form. There is a lot of passion in it, and a depth to it that many poems lack.
*Off to read more*
by HOLLY ARMER
Well done...I'm very impressed with this piece! I especially like this line"
"Tell me those sweet lies that I need so desperately to hear"
Although some of the thing's men say are quite untrue, they are so lovely to hear! This poem is jam packed with passion and deep feeling...Take care~Holly
by Steven Beesley
As always, you never cease to amaze me with your beautiful writing.
Wow! I absolutely love this poem! It's like the reader can almost physically feel what you're describing. Awesome job; Wonderfully written! Thanks so much for commenting on my poem. Means a lot! Keep up the great work!
Wow! i thought i was the only one who wrote in ryming acrostic! cool! yay!
Very Creative. A beautiful piece of Artwork!
by Taylor Renee
Wow, you really are an incredible writer. all of them are just wonderful. i wish i could write HALF as good as you can :D
Loved it alot
keep it up :)