Nice poem. Keep your head up and stay strong. Don't stop writing, you're really good and i look forward to reading more. 5/5 check out my poem "it hurts real bad" if you can

Wow. This is one of the best poems I've ever read! You should definately keep writing. I'm new with this so when I make a poem, check it out please!

Wow... um, i dont know what to say. i mean, its a good poem and all, amazing rhymes, but reading this knowing that you wrote it really scares me. im not sure who it directed to, but im sorry if i ever made you feel like im not there to talk or i dont care, because thats not how i feel at all. i want you to know you can always talk to me if something is going on and i will try my hardest to find something, anything that i can do about it. please, if you ever feel like cutting, please call me or something, i dont care what you do or when, as long as it keeps you from hurting yourself. you could at one in the morning, i dont care. i wont get in trouble, so dont worry about it. just please, if you ever feel like cutting, please try to stop by talking to me or someone else, i dont care. just please find something that will help you stop.

Very, very, nice job!!!