this is so cool how you do the songs and suff! this one is really good! i love the chorus, it's fabulous (can't spell) sorrry i'm tryin to get all your new poems read and commented!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~~

Wow sweet, this is amazing. I can relate very well. My boyfriend used to stay out forever with his "mates" and then just brush it off like it was nothing - it pissed me off, and heck i'm glad it's over :D

Love you sweetie,
+^ Kal.

INFINITY huh? well

*opens NEW case* since u practically ate the last one, INFINITY means nothing to a blonde like me! i go for the facts and reality and as stated your poem is better, facts already shown hunny! *closes NEW case* since you practially ate the last one.

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~ lol i feel like a lil kid again too!

*looks at newest torched case, says final goodbye and digs grave* *mean while finds a new one, ha as the case reads jacklyn's right for once, ta da!, case closed*

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love but hun this case is shut up!

more votes don't mean ne thing! you prolly get more comments. so ha

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love from the bottom of her heart~

nice is it a song lol? meh w/e good stuff

I like this one, I thought it was good.

the best song i have read on this song!! great writing xxx

what the... the best song i have read on this site!!! i knew what i meanted :D

well if it's a song it needs to be longer, but it was very well written! 5/5, keep it up! i would like to hear the mu sic to it...hmm..haha good job!

O_O I don't think it's that good to be honest with you all.....and i'm the author lol! thanx for all the comments pplz!

I'm trying to figure out how it got on the highest rating......:P

Peace 2 all! //ari\\

aww man my rating went down lol tht's ok keepin my stuff on the DL i guess :P Peace Pplz! //ari\\

im only 14 n my relationships arent forever but i was n luv n he cheated on me n it sux i cried for like ever n didnt no what to do but i had to leave me keep it up

can you sing?...lol

aaww u're so thoughtful, u wrote a song! 25/5! i really like it!