I read this, and i was reminded of the past. you are not the only one who went through this, but you are one of the few who have learned from mistakes. in regards to the way you wrote this poem, excellent couldn't have done it better. this poem could really change some peopls lives, share it with the world.
Reading that poem brings back alot of things in mylife. I am a writer and have been for a long time but lately I have n\'t wrote because I just lost my little boy. i was pregnant gave birth and he died. i feel like i did something wrong. i was in and out of trouble my whole life and did messed up things but now looking back i have made great improvments and its amazing that you can sit back and relize your mistakes and man up to them b/c most people cant and wont do that and i give you full repsect for that