Very well planned poem. Using a trial situation to deal with the real issues of life, its very clever. I enjoy it very much. You are an amazing writer km, and you have a very creative style. Sticking to the subject might be an issue but leaving the reality of the subject also makes it more interesting. Awesome poem. ;-)

Very nicely written, it's very unique and full of emotion.. 5/5 nothing less.. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

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Wonderful poem, very well written, I am adding you to my favorites list. Take care, I hope to read more soon.