tear worthy

wow this is a truely amazing poem and you did a great job on it...you made it possible to visually see what was happening and still feel it to...great job keep it up...5/5

good poem!! i really like it

.truths da truth. (guhd poem0

Great Poem

That poem is short, really sad, and easy to read! I love it. Excellent poem!

Jeez, this poem was seriously incredible. It flowed so perfectly and was absolutley amazing!

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

this was so sad and powerful. sends the message deep inside the reader. you have talent. by the way, the poem Pretty Girl was no inspired by my homelife whatsoever...but I'm flattered that you thought so because it compliments my creativity. 5/5
~*Freak*~

Genius:|...but sad..5/5 ;)

Amazing poem. Very sad- Loved the feeling put into it. Keep writing, don't waste your talent. Unless of course.. you want to.. haha. 5*

Thank's for commenting my poem. Each and every comment means alot to me.